Trolley Haiku
Sommerville Open Studios, Trolley Poet Reading
For Gloria Mindock
1.
Poets asked to christen path
in lieu of budget.
2.
I, rambling madman
of public transportation?
Counselor was right!
3.
Driver slips off-route.
Poetry’s about new paths,
but where are we man?
4.
Clang clang clang went the
trolley, ding ding ding went the—
I’M TRYING TO READ!
5.
Bump-induced stutters.
Even the haikus I read
sound like s-s-s-sestinas.
6.
For accuracy
pseudo-T’s fight earliness
with random stopping.
7.
Theoretically,
the first poetry slammers:
subway pulpiteers.
8.
For accuracy,
if people aren't listening,
we bellow, make them.
9.
For accuracy,
people briefly remember
our public forums.
10.
nobody has to admit
that their listening.
5 comments:
I like the senryu.
That was a fun reading. I posted an account of my own ride on the trolley as well. Of course, I'm no stranger to poems about public transportation.
I'm sorry Chad. I was so busy reading your poems that I didn't notice you had already linked to my account of the trolley readings.
However, to be fair, I did not take the photographs. The pictures were by Gloria Mindock. It would not be for another ten days later before I owned a digital camera.
Thanks for the comment, Ian.
As for the whole haiku/senryu thing, my position is:
1. The rules for haiku have become lax to the point that I'm comfortable using the term for my five-seven-fives.
2. I announce a poem as a senryu, and the audience will just give me that "dog just shown a card trick" type of stare.
In case you haven't noticed by now, Chad, I relish the "dog just shown a card trick" stare.
By the way, you really should have gone over to my blog and mentioned in the comment section that you had written your own account.
But, since you didn't; I did. May you get many readers.
You really need an archive widget. I had to go to technorati.com (a great resource for bloggers, by the way) in order to find the URL for this post.
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