Friday, April 26, 2024

Stone Soup Croutons, 4-17-24: Final Act


Stone Soup Croutons is a weekly poem I write using lines and impressions selected from Stone Soup Poetry's open mic readers and features. I figure out a title (and sometimes the rest of the poem) later. You can read the other ones I've done since 2015 here.
 
I also have a book collecting the best of my first year of poems. Click here to purchase it.

Last week, Sue Savoy featured at Stone Soup Poetry. Then many things happened between Friday and Monday morning, making this crouton poem very late. I'm glad I got the video of Sue's reading up as it was very well received.

I still have this week's Crouton to write. The best way to push through when you have self-imposed deadlines is to write your poem like you're writing a Sue Savoy poem (or try to anyway).Sue's poems are fun to listen to, so it was fun to make the attempt. 

Thanks for reading.


Final Act 
 
A man rising from 
his set on the train 
to let you sit just
might make up 
for the stray cat 
biting you when
you tried to pet it.

Or the dog in the
park that's digging 
a hole just big enough 
to sprain your ankle.

Or the medical bill 
for when the hospital
used extra tech that
lit up when they said
they can't help you. 

Or the injustices of 
a man who wears 
his women's hearts
like clown noses, 
whose presence 
shadows the earth 
like an eclipse people
can't stop blinding 
themselves over.

Or the stray bullet 
fired by a soldier
who mistakes you 
for a protester just
because you chose 
to be out in the daytime.

That one kind act 
may help a little, if
it's the last thing 
going through your head
before the bullet. 

Rich Boucher didn't read. Why'd I put him on twice?

Special thanks to Richard Spisak, Jackie Chou, Ken Johnson, Jan Rowe, Robert Fleming, Ethan Mackler, Dhyana, James Van Looy and special feature Sue Savoy.

1 comment:

Ken Johnson said...

Nice compilation of Sue-Savoyisms.
Don't tell her this, but never wanting to be on the T with crass inbred idiots again is one reason why I retired early.